Gooood job

Oh thats sad. i know wat it's like for the depression to grab u. don't give up though. ur a really good writter.
and yeah just don't give up. keep up the good work.
love ya willow xxoo

That is really sad! i know what it is like.your a great writer!, welldone!
love mel

Heyy its me Chelss=) Great job! I really like this one!=) XoX

Check out my poems and comment plz

Wow girl thats so sad and hard
but its a beautiful poem and i love reading your poems

dnt let it win!!!
your friends on here will help you through if you need someone to talk to im here

keep your head up and try and smile:)

lana

Wooooooow very good
dont let it win
be strong hunni
feel free to P M me
me x x x

Thats so sad!! but very good

Great read! Very sad yet i can relate to this. I hope your ok, you can talk to me whenever you like hun. I hope depression doesnt win. :(
Ok about the poem i liked the flow of it, i thought that "if i hads a dime" was a tiny bit cliche. yet i klept on reading as you kept me hooked till the end. It was VERY emotional, and meaningful. A subjkect most of us can relate to some time in out life. It had a good rhyme sense, and none of them seemed to be forced.
A good read! Thanks for your comment and keep writing!
xx