Wow love this poem i really like this part
Lingering memories,
in a world so cold, still
in you they hold.
i just really love how the words go together in that

Tender words, that spread
like burning fire, and in
you this lonely desire.

I love that stanza right there...definitely in my opinion, the best of the writing. I said it before, and before that, you literally stitch emotion into every line. You're an emotional writer, and I like that...I try to be like that as much as possible, and I like seeing other people pull it off as well as you.

Again, great poem

Did ushow ur sexy fireman this poem???!! lol!

Wow i love it keep writin and yeh i did listen to neyo lol. thanks for the comment.