I had a hard time with this poem, trying to say what i wanted to say, and it still didnt come out right, but i hope that those of you who feel me, understand what i was trying to get at. I knew what I wanted to say, but I couldnt quite make it sound the way I wanted to.

ReBecca... This is quite different and unique. While I understood your poem, I found something more in it. I felt a kind of dark and mystical sense which loomed over me. I think it was the beginning that done it. I really like this piece, it somehow expels tragedy. A great piece. I hope others can appreciate this one too!

The way you write is quite unique I have to concur with Sie!
I really enjoyed the way you wrote, the flow it created. It was actually kind of sad to me though because there are so many people out there who do indeed feel the way you have described. I am hoping your not one of them because there is beauty within us all! Great write Rebecca!
Chelsey

I love originality and uniqueness Rebecca and this poem has so much of that style incororated...its deep yet its direct and firm. Its thought provoking...I read it a few times and my impression changed with each time as did my train of thought....this is a great write probably one of the best i have had the pleasure of reading all week! Great work Rebecca be yourself darls I love your work!!

Rebecca,
first of all, i like this poem so much, not only beautiful penned, but unique yet creative written....though simply but well ended...keep writting coz it will help you...

anyway, thanks for your nice comment, i very appreciated, have a great day, take care. bert ~