Really cool poem, rhymes well and everything, Keep writing! =)

Hmm... I didn't really get this poem... Whered the blood come from? Otherwise nice write. The rhyming was really good in itself, though I really don't know how I can explain that to you without sounding cheezy... nice job, just didn't get the message, sorry.

Aww. I feel like this sometimes lol. It's a great feeling to have. And it was expressed well in this. The flow was excellent, and it fit perfectly, and the rhymes were not too bad. Keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Well written, good bodied poem.
Im not into rhyming, but i love reading people's whose poems do rhyme.
I loved it, 5/5.
xx