WOW!!! What an amazing piece. I was particularly blown away with the ending. I love this energy of love that oozes from this piece. I love the way you wait behind the scenes examining the pain, then when you are needed you heal the hurt. Written with such subtlety and exuberance.

You have written a lovely poem here Sarah, one which I shall read again and again I'm sure.

Another good write. I liked the metaphor of clinging onto branches in the trees to express love. The only thing I can suggest, is on the second line of the first stanza "simple and pure" is a little cliche, so maybe better wording would be good here. Thanks for sharing.

Great job, very creative imagery. I liked the "twig" part, very original

Wow this one is really interesting....in a good way...i lik it alot....and a interesting title 2..keep on writing!!

Great ending i like how you use a tree as an example for love. This is very creative great job!!!!

Wow thats a really good poem i like its flow well done xxx