Ooooooo this poem makes me wnt to just go camping with a huge camp fire..awsome poem!

Awe! Jessy! I love Marshmellows. They're yum. And reading a poem about them makes me hungry. Taha!

Loved this. It was so great. I can just picture people sitting by a fire with marshmellows on twigs lmao. Great job hun! 5/5

Natalie``

Hey i dont really like this kind of poem, but i think you have done a really great job on this one!
well done
love mel

Short, but really good. i like it. i could never write a poem like this tho i would think too hard about it lol. but u did good!

OMG Jess you totally just described my family and friends on summer nights..we always have bonfires and thats what we all do! It made me smile! I love this style of writing this was excellent!
Krissey

Lol, I don't know why but this made me smile... It was just the ending. I don't know, but it was nicely done. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Wrapped cosily inside big warm
Blankets is and reads as 1 sentence with 10 syllables
maybe you should change that into 2 realy seperate lines of 8 and 2

Jessy,

I loved this poem!