It was a touching poem, and i liked it a lot. it reminded me of a poem that i had gotten my e-mail. one of those chains. it was good, and there were a few grammar and spelling mistkes. at the beginning there was a space between a letter that was supposed to be in a word. but that's fine, cuz it's a great poem. great job!! :-D

Great poem! I think it was well put together

It read smoothly to me, i loved it. easy to visualize. 10/10