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  • 16 years ago

    by Birgit

    =] Aawww, cute ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaz

    Sweet.. thought..

  • 16 years ago

    by halie

    Awww dats so sweet
    &&cute lol i loved it
    5/5
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Awwww, super CUTEEEE!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Short yet cute...i liked the ending
    "but if you wanted love id send you me! "
    very romantic

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Nice rhyming!! its very sweet and so cute!!! :P

  • 15 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Lovely short n sweet poem..

    keep writing

    best wishz... karan

  • 15 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    That is a very cute poem you wrote. And I really love the ending!

  • 15 years ago

    by alwayssofresh16

    Yea... i like this one... its short but it says all it needs to say

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    I've seen this before, you should try writing something of your own coz you do have talent. I like this little poem tho, it's sweet. Em