Wow, that was amazing.. The descriptions were beautiful and the flow effortless.. All your rhymes worked brilliantly and the emotion was sad and very clear..

who cried bloody tear
^ Should be "tears" not "tear"

Wonderful work 5/5

Wow. i love it buut hope you are really not the girl who wants to die ? or are u an emo that will explain it all ?? but hey really sad poem but i like it ! i think :P comment on some of my poems if u like but b warned they're crap !!

Its original.
some parts broke the rhythm but i still liked it.
thank you for your words and prayers.
Love you for it.
~Emah
4/5

OMG!! i luv this poem!! it relates to me soo much!! a 5/5 for me..keep on writing!!!

I don't know, it seems weak..u have a point in ur poem and u showed it, but a bit weak

It seems like the title of this poem should be changed to "I Am", only because it would make it stronger in each verse. It was a good poem, but I didn't like how you rhymed 14 with 15.. lol but oh well. Still a good poem.

Dear Child I hope this is not true about you. This was so sad for me to read because I am a person who deeply cares for the people of the world and when I read poems like these it breaks my heart because some people are blind to know that there are other people who will give anything to take these feelings away from you. I would if I could....keep your head up and on your shoulders right!
Krissey

I liked the ending, but again, it was very cliche. It sounded like every 'I hate the world' poem.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5