Comments : Because of you

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    This was good.. But it had a lot of grammer mistakes.. Also, the flow wasn't that good.. The love and emotion was nice though, as were your descriptions.. Nice job 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Krissey

    Yeah Jessy said it..the only problem was the grammar...I tend to get turned of when there are grammar mistakes and so do other readers, but besides that, I did keep reading and I liked it! You described the love you feel for this person very deeply and the poem was bursting with emotion! Excellent job with that!
    Krissey

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    ı love darling

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Again, another favourite.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    I can tell u have experienced love before, it can be a good feeling or could be the worst one, this is a very very good poem, perfect grammer, 5/5!!!

  • Aw, this was such a sweet poem. It's a really great poem. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • This is a really good poem. Although, I think this line is missing a word:

    "You make my moody heart to Completely happy"

    I think it should be like this:

    "You make my heart turn completely happy"

    It's just a suggestion though. Other than that, it's pretty good.

    .CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    I love how you wrote this poem about the reasons why you're in love. Its a very good poem. The flow was nice, the concept was great, and it was worded beautifully! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    I like this one... you explained your emotions very well.. the flow was good and everything. 5/5 on this one.=]