You really have a weird imagination :P haha that's all I can think of reading your two newest poems. Wow, that's really good Kaylee, this can take you far!!!.. You should start writing stories.. I would read them!!.. Can't wait to see the finished version of this :D
For being so short, it was a clever and very well delivered poem. Once again you show your creativity and poetic ability. I can't wait to read more of your poetry.
13 years ago
by Tara Kay
I thought this was really good, it was capturing from the start and once you have worked on it more and added to it, i am sure it will be absolutely awesome.
I liked the set-up and flow.