Wow.. in those few lines you enclosed such a powerful and emotion peice of writting, great write.. keep it up..5/5..
best wishes..
Please rate and comment on my poemsthanks..
Kirsty Palmer xx

Great job once again on this poem i liked it and since i like ur poems ur on my fave list cant wait to see what you write next keep it up5/5

Nice small poem. Myself as a reader can expand on this idea easily.

It's short yet sweet and to the point. I like it a lot because so few words hold such deep meaning. Great job. The flow and everything was perfect, and I think a lot of people have felt the same, I know I have. 5/5 for sure keep up the awesome work

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Wow. its short but its like my life story... lol. love it 5/5