Comments : Misty Figures

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael Mantione

    This poem has a simple eligance to it that makes it quite interesting. I enjoyed reading it even though it was short.

  • 13 years ago

    by SEAN

    Well written great work

  • Hey great poem!
    i love reading 'dark' poems, but i cant really write them!
    wonderful job
    love mel

  • 13 years ago

    by sibyllene

    Oh! ok, that makes so much more sense. i read the poem through an entire time thinking "figures" said "fingers." doh. sorry about that. this is a good poem! spooky

  • 13 years ago

    by Natalie

    Oooh. woweee-- Jessy! This was really dark. Loved it! All the details and imagry were great in this. Def. a 5/5 from meeee. =D Keep it up!


  • 13 years ago

    by Nelle

    I really liked this. just one thing the last sentence doesn't really rhyme that much to me. the rest of flowed really well. and you wrote it beautifully. Maybe you could just like change a word or two, might make more sense. but either way i lvoed it, it was great!

  • 13 years ago

    by Krissey

    Normally I'd like poems to be a bit longer, but I liked this one Jess because you used the right choice of words to make it seem like we were reading a poem with about 5 stanzas, but there were only 2...thats awesome I love it!

  • 13 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I don't think I've read such an eerie poem before. Good job! I love to see you writing about new things and trying new styles. That's awesome!

    Keep it up hunn.
    Much Love,

  • 13 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    I liked this poem dark but well written keep it up 5/5 from me

  • 13 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Very nicely written.. Very dark and sinister; just the way I Love it. You seem to have gotten downrated on this poem -- it's not a 4.5. Just remember you did very well on this poem. The lowest it should have ever gotten was a 4.9. But good job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 13 years ago

    by Sophie

    Good work Jessy!

    nice and captivating poem

    lovely work


  • 13 years ago

    by xxbabigrrlxx

    Wow ... everything flowed REALLY well and even though it was short it was a really captivating poem that caught my attention...keep up the good work chica!!!!!!


  • 13 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    You use the word angrily but then describe them as happy. Such a big contrast with nothing between the too. You may also want to limit words ending in -ly, for some reason they just throw some poems off. The rest of the poem was good though for some of your descriptions.