I like this poem, and the saftey of repeating a line to start i like that style poem, gd work. sorry bout te guy bu the sounds of it you have been through the hedges, keep fighting through. Gd work keep it up.

Whoa! I found this a poem story/poem! Your rhymes and choice of words were awesome and very deep! THis poem was brilliant I only hope it was made up and not about you or someone you know!
-Krissey

Love it, love it, LOVE IT!! u are really talented and this poem gave me the chills. keep up the great work

Aww I really liked this poem.. great wording, great flow, great write, another great poem 5/5 xx

I love this.. i kno how u feel. i can really relate to this. u have alot of talent.. i lvoe how u wrote this. i like the flow of it all and how it all fits together perfectly.. if u ever wana talk email me i will always reply and be there for you
take care
luve angie

All i can say is that was absoulutly brilliant!!

I really like it,
it has so much passion and emotion.
wonderful wonderful job =]
--lexie

Awww I love this poem so much. I can relate to it a little, too. Never ever ever stop writing. You're fabulous at it!!!!!

Awhh,, thats so sad hun.. The flow was great and I liked how it was a little bit awkward at points.. The descriptions were amazing and the emotion was clear.. Keep your chin up! 5/5

Wow wow wow, brilliant!!!! 5/5

A very nicely written poem that i really enjoyed reading, great job
5/5

This..I can realte to in so many ways, as could alot of teenage girls I am guessing. I really loved it, it was sad though.

Ohhh! I liked this one loads! ^_^

[pretty little girl
broken by a boy
used and exploited
used as a toy]
^^^Gosh! You have no idea how much that resembles me! And I know how you feel if it's true. If you ever need anyone to talk to, PM's are welcomed. =)

I liked the flow, the rhymes were a bit cliche, but the idea was fantastic. I liked it a lot. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow this is another nice poem! u got the talent big times! keep it up!

OH MY GOD. I LOVE THIS ONE. It is so good! The emotion, the depth, the heart! TRULY AMAZING. Nice work!

Nice...it speaks the truth...