WOW...such a powerful poem, you wrote it so well there is just one little problem..not critique..just help :) ..In the last stanza, you wrote..'meant' and i think you mean 'mean'..on both occasions.. hope this helps..
Best Wishes..
Please rate and comment on my poems, Thanks..
Kirsty Palmer xXx

Hi Kirsty!

And thanks..I really need some help sometimes, always feel free to teach me.. I am just humble front of criticism and thankfull from all help. :)

I have read some of ur poems..I like ur style. I will keep reading. :)

You are excused although you should't ask for pardon you aren't to excuse, you did nothing wrong to me, you have neven been bad.. you are so tender and soulful... you give me this pure and warm which doesn't exist in my life....

U r too kind for me Nouredine..