Please write comments on the poem...i really wanna know other peoples thoughts

Wow a very great poem, you have showed a great emotions.
keep up the great job 5/5

Wow! very good poem yet sad but i loved it! lots of emotions there...it flowed very well and the rhyming was very good..i think you should use different words which mean the same thing ( if that makes sense!) but very well written poem...well done on a GREAT job! 5/5
Keep writing
And
Keep Smiling

Much LOve
*-A.Pathetic.Mistake
xxx

Omg..
wow.. just wow..
I love the line "I dig the knife in, to ease my pain, the blood trickles down, i've hit a main vein"
beautiful.. keep writing

Wow this is awesome good job u showed some real emotion in this and i think u did a very good job :D

keenan

Oh my gosh...brianna....this made me cry...wow dont you ever feel like that guys are jerks!! Wow this is so sad and over whelming I loved it just wow!! your amazing!!