Comments : For ben

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, that was quite cutee.. The flow was good and the emotion clear.. I think that the descriptions could be improved though, try adding more detail into them.. Nice job 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lithium

    Awww thats so cute, i like the ideas in your poem very sweet xox sam

  • 17 years ago

    by DeadGirl AKA Becka

    That is such a cute poem, Im really looking forward to read all your poems! ~Oh and Thanx for the comment, It means alot to know that people like my work:) Luvs *~DeadGirl~*

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren

    Thanks for commentin my poem...i can really relate to this one especially the part about doing the right thing so he'll be proud bc thats exacly wut i do bc of my boyfriend....u got talent