THis is one of your best Amber, the rhyme is perfect and the message is so important.

This really is one of your best. I loved the message and the way you wrote it. It was beautifully sad, yet it had a lesson. It was amazing, Amber. I hope you start writing more again.

Really powerful message. i liked the meaninga nd the flow. it all worked really well. thanks for ur kind comment on my poem. it meant a lot : D
cheers.
-Suz

This is really good and touching

Very simply put and beautiful! I enjoy the story of your write, the imagery was very vivid, an excellent piece.