Oh a very sad and strong poem,
you have done a great job
5/5

This was a pretty good poem. The only thing I think would make this better is if you took out the "..." it just makes the poem look scrappy. Other than that, great job!

Really great! keep it up!

Great poem but it would be better in the "dark poems" section. :)

Really great poem. strong emotions.

Lovely poem...your awsome GABBY! the (...) wow you could lose some of them lol! keep up the wonderful work! *gives you 5 1/2 stars* =P oh btw thanks for the comment!
love you bunches
~Amber Dawn~

I really like all ur titles to ur poems they r very meaning ful!! 5/5

I really like all ur titles to ur poems they r very meaning ful!! 5/5

So interesting and so horrible on the other side,you really balanced it so well,good work 5/5

Hi!!! Thankx 4 ur comment on my poem. Urs is great 2! keep it up! 5/5

~K3!$3Y~

Omg! u are sooo awesome!
I love all your poems ^_^

Oh my gosh! this is so sad...It made me cry almost never think about taking your life thats scary stuff I'm always here even though you don;t know me someones always here for you..

Wonderful poem. i think u did a great job on this. but let me mention something.
"I can't take it this life anymore"
you can take out the "it" because that messes up the flow of the line and isnt very good grammer.

"Why did everyone that i love hates me now?"
you can change it to "why did everyone i love hate me now?"

but its your choice. i think this poem was over all really great. keep up the good work. 5/5

Great poem.
You did a great job in writing it.

~Chelsea

Powerful words. Lovely poem...

Josie

I loved this poem it was very well done 5/5
~Jess