I really like the point of this poem. You definitely wrote it effectively. The fourth line of your poem seemed forced, but I loved every other single part of the poem. I look forward to reading more of your poetry, if you'd like me to!

I really don't know what to say, marvelous!!!!! marvelous!!!!!! 55555

Wow, another great expresion in this poem, great job and keep it up
5/5

Excellent, loved it all the way through. simple, sweet and meaningful. :)xx

Wow, i realy enjoyed this.

Awwww, how romantic
great poem and great way of writing
I love this poem its so simply written and outstanding!
sweet rhyme and great sense of compassion =D

Keep it up and stay the best ;)
Luv
NemOxxxxxxxxxxx

Good poem. nice rhyming and excellent flow. The poem is simple but still very meaningful and strong. Great job

Beautiful poem! i loved it i can really relate!

please comment on my poems and i will do the same for you!

Very nice. I love the tempo of your poetry. It is wonderfully written.
Alays Loretta

Well you never can get enough compliments so I'll tell you again. THAT WAS A GREAT POEM!!!!!
I GIVE YOU A 10

Oh god...I feel like I can see straight from that point of view..

Lovely poem, just all around awesome.

Well done

That is very strong keep it up.

Beautiful job, very deep and thoughtful questions..though I didn't understand some of them. Keep it up

Wow that was a really good poem!
keep up the good work and ill sure to read more of u poems

5/5

Nice vocab and excellent use of it. Great theme :)

Powerful poem i like alot.
comment on mine pls:) thanks

I really enjoyed reading this poem, it is really intense and thoughtful keep it up i look forward to reading more

sarah

I liked it. The wording was good and it flowed nicely. The only suggestion I would make is that you might add more to the poem. Make it a little meatier.

gave it 5/5

A great and tender piece. I really liked this as well