Comments : Since When?

  • 17 years ago

    by Samantha

    I really like the point of this poem. You definitely wrote it effectively. The fourth line of your poem seemed forced, but I loved every other single part of the poem. I look forward to reading more of your poetry, if you'd like me to!

  • 17 years ago

    by Aline

    I really don't know what to say, marvelous!!!!! marvelous!!!!!! 55555

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, another great expresion in this poem, great job and keep it up
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Excellent, loved it all the way through. simple, sweet and meaningful. :)xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Wow, i realy enjoyed this.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nee

    Awwww, how romantic
    great poem and great way of writing
    I love this poem its so simply written and outstanding!
    sweet rhyme and great sense of compassion =D

    Keep it up and stay the best ;)
    Luv
    NemOxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem. nice rhyming and excellent flow. The poem is simple but still very meaningful and strong. Great job

  • 17 years ago

    by megann anne

    Beautiful poem! i loved it i can really relate!

    please comment on my poems and i will do the same for you!

  • 17 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Very nice. I love the tempo of your poetry. It is wonderfully written.
    Alays Loretta

  • 17 years ago

    by braydens1mommy

    Well you never can get enough compliments so I'll tell you again. THAT WAS A GREAT POEM!!!!!
    I GIVE YOU A 10

  • 17 years ago

    by Dacey Flame

    Oh god...I feel like I can see straight from that point of view..

    Lovely poem, just all around awesome.

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Well done

  • 17 years ago

    by ~Ashley Danielle~

    That is very strong keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Beautiful job, very deep and thoughtful questions..though I didn't understand some of them. Keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by candace

    Wow that was a really good poem!
    keep up the good work and ill sure to read more of u poems

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Static

    Nice vocab and excellent use of it. Great theme :)

  • 17 years ago

    by BlAcK RoSe

    Powerful poem i like alot.
    comment on mine pls:) thanks

  • 17 years ago

    by ♥s|a|r|a|h♥

    I really enjoyed reading this poem, it is really intense and thoughtful keep it up i look forward to reading more

    sarah

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked it. The wording was good and it flowed nicely. The only suggestion I would make is that you might add more to the poem. Make it a little meatier.

    gave it 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by yogi73

    A great and tender piece. I really liked this as well