Broken Heart

by Crystal Redl   Aug 25, 2006


You shot a bullet through my heart
and broke my heart in two
i looked into your eyes once
and saw a future with you.
whenever you were near,
i felt like i could fly.

you confused my heart
so many times, noe i've
lost all meaning of the words " i love you"
sometimes you make me want to cry.
why did you use and lie to me so,
i thought we had something special.

i'll never forget what you did
and how you made me cry
my feelings for you will never change
regaurdless of what you did
!i'll always love and cherish you!

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  • 18 years ago

    by isabel

    Your poem is really well written (though there is a little spell mistake in the 3rd stanza, now, not noe)
    it portraits an difficult to understand love (he hurts you, but there's love anyway), what i also like to do myself... =)
    the flow is very nice, the structure is a bit confusing, but very original...the rhyme scheme contrasts with the structure to create a really nice effect...(i don't know who dared to downrate you, this poem is wonderful...)
    5/5
    keep going
    *isabel*

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