Well i think this is great also ur quotes r awesome =]

I think this poem was beautiful....honestly I have no critique for it. It was a depiction of love and sadness. It was great. But you should no, no guy is worth that pain. You seem like a great person and writer, you can get over him and find someone better. again, beautiful poem.

THAT iS AMAZiNG! WOW;; YOU GOT SOME REAL TALENT GiRL! KEEP iT UP!

_______HiS FRiEND*

Wow! You definitely have talent! You're awesome!

I really like it, i think its good.

Love this poem, truely awesome! great work, i love your quotes too! keep writin, u rock!
____XOX

Wow!! i felt like that a exact year from now but i still love him to death!! i love it!! u can put it into words better than i can..10/10

Wow. yeah i know how u feel. its happened to me before. the guy says all the right things, u think he's one of the good ones, he gives you the look that makes u crazy about him, than u fall for him, u think u can't live without him. i'm not gunna lie it took me a while to get over it. i still don't think i'm completly over it. just try to open ur eyes to other guys. you never know who could be waiting for u to just run into his arms.

c/b

This is absolutely amazing. i loved it.

You are my favorite author so far and u jus keep amazing me with every word, and i been therre recently, breath...if its meant they will come bacc...promise.

Hi.
Love your poem, and I can really relate to what you're feeling. You just have to get over him , I know it's hard but there's just no other cure. I'm not going to tell you these stupid things like that you have to look for another guy, cause I realize you just can't and that forgetting him is impossible. Kinda going through the same. Mail me anytime.
:) greats x

Wow. that was rrly good. i also kno how you feel. again wow. i like it. its cute and deep. <333