There we go...thats the ending...it makes the poem sound better...5.5

I love this poem i can relate to it soo much!!!

*sniff sniff* DON't DO IT!!!

A great one, and nice choice at the end, my believe is LIFE HAPPENS, DEAL WITH IT.
nice poem 5/5

This poem reflects depression seemingly only from a mental standpoint at the start progressing to spirituality and honest emotion..bravo

Well... what a wonderful poem i understand the emotion of this poem. flow was good thanks

Great poem and rhyming.I really liked it.Quite sad though, but it was very well written.Keep it up!
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

I like this one... nice job

Another masterpeace

Wow..you have lots of talent, this was very good.

I like this one better than the first one!!! i love the ending, it's amazing!!!!! i really don't know what else to say... great job! 5/5

In the second stanza the B-rhyme of worse and burst seemed a bit forced, but other than that the poem was great. I loved the last two stanzas.

I like this one better... Each stanza seems to stand out on its own...

``Every day I smile and hide my pain with laughter.
Nobody can see through. Nobody can see the pain.
Should I try to be happy and force myself to chase after
The happy things, or should I accept misery and not complain?
--> How about 'Nobody can see through. No One can see the pain'? Two 'Nobodys' in the same line is kinda repetitive.

``All this pain I keep bottled is gonna make me burst!
--> I agree with the person above. This line... something about it, seems forced.

``Everyone thinks I am so happy and full of delight.
But that just proves how little they know and the fact that they're blind.
I am going so crazy in my head I don't even think I can make it through the night;
My head is full of confusion. No where to go but out of my mind!
--> I love this. The last line is awesome!

Excellent rhyming and flow in the 4th stanza.

``At times I can't focus or concentrate.
Sometimes I just let myself go, and don't worry about my health.
All these thoughts of suicide I cant help but to contemplate.
I just want to know how it would be if I were to kill my self.
--> Good vOcab. How about '...how Would It Be..' Just a suggestion hmm.

The 6th stanza is good.

``Suicide is the only way for me to find the answer...but it's not a logical choice
something inside keeps telling me to do it but I know it's far from smart
So I just continue to endure and continue to ignore that little voice
and I will continue to try to preserve all of the sanity in my heart
--> This is a very good ending. How about 'So i just continue to endure And Ignore That Little voice', just to make it short n non-repetitive? :)

Great Work! 5/5 :).