Wow...This is really, really good. I'm not sure I liked the flow, but the poem itself was amazing... Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Wow, you started this page with a great poem that I am sure most of us will remeber it forever.
In my opinion soon you will be one of the great poet in this site if you keep writing like this.
welcome to this site and great job again in your first poem
i really enjoyed it, 5/5

DAMN what a poem, this was to amingly written, so deep and mysterious, I loved it....I am speachless....I a, sure that you will be one of our top poets very soon, if you keep poems like this one coming...

Much Love Sabrina

Hey great poem, i love the way you wrote this, amazing poem!
love mel

That was amazing, really imaginateive, captured my heart, a really deep meaning and thought. Keep writing, because this was absolutely brilliant!!
Love Tara-Kay

Wow that pretty deep! but i do like it a lot....u put good thought into it, good job

That was really awesome congrats

I like the flow of this poem 5-5...it was really good..

OMGOMGOMG
this is one of the best ever
i loved the story and the rhyme
and every single word.
I LOVED IT.

-Amberina*

Very intriguing

What text is this? Betrayal and lies..Is it the Bible? Straightforward and imaginative, good work.
-Sara

OMG, that was like... the best poem i read this year... I loved it all the way through, i was thinkin to myself i wonder how it was going to end and u did a really good job of it... Thanx for one of the best reads this year.
Karma.

And my mum seys my poems are dark i loved it
love yu lol

DAMN what a poem, this was to amingly written, so deep and mysterious, I loved it....I am speachless....I a, sure that you will be one of our top poets very soon, if you keep poems like this one coming...

~*lia*~