Hmm...cool poem, v v dark...darkness surrounds...this is cool..keep it up...

I loved the dark ness and haunting sadness in this poem. then the hidden power in the end. it was beautiful

I love this poem it is so dark and i could sorta relate to it in a way...keep the good work up...

I love this poem it is so dark and i could sorta relate to it in a way...keep the good work up...

I love this poem it is so dark and i could sorta relate to it in a way...keep the good work up...

The morbid illusion you created in this poem is like a beautiful nightmare come alive... And the flow of your words are so captivating... 5/5! :)