Oh god, another great poem by a very wonderful poet, as I read your poems I really want to read more of it, cause you are an amazing poet,
well done
5/5

Awh, wow hunny! That was so amazing.. The imagery was so clear and vivid, I could see the scene in front of me.. The descriptions were filled with detail and the emotion was strong..

Till the emotions are to much to handle.
^ The first "to" should be "too"

Nicely done sweetie, Ily. 5/5

Everyone has their own ways of drowning away pain and depression they don't want to feel. I have never thought of I self-prostitute for money in this light before, you gave me something to think about. A brave and powerful write.

-Tainted

Great use of words and strong message, awesome job!