Comments : Enamored!!! (Slightly Edited)

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    D0 u read the dicti0nary my g0d im always amazed at the w0rds written in ur p0ems they are always s0 unique and different!! =D keep up the great w0rk. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem is intensely passionate and very well written I am sure it would thrill most ramantic interest. You have a lot of talent

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    Like i liked loads!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Heart Locket

    Everything about this poem is utterly amazing! The way you view women, respectfully and how important we are to you. Its just so nice to see that there are still men out there like that.

    I especially loved that part in your piece where you said: "Her Lips, luxurious; luscious, soft, and full,
    Supple and sensuous, and all so kissable."
    The "kissable" just sends sparks on that part of your poem. *haha* Its put together so well! 5/5. Excellent work!

    Dearest,
    Brit

    Also, thank you for commenting on my poetry.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awhh, that was so sweet Robert! The flow was a little off because of all the differences in the length of your lines.. But the descriptions and love made up for that.. There was a lot of imagery in this piece which made it enjoyable to read! Nicely done! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Misstress

    Such Beauty in every line..
    Captivating.

    God Bless!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ellie

    The description is truly lovely. Nice job.

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Very well written. I enjoy my read, kel.