I really liked the pace of this one. It seemed to mimick the liquid flow of the blood so well. Your choice of words was both stark and compelling.

Wow dark and kewl...i would call it a bloody diamond haha very good!! well again!

Different
cute
deep
dark
loved it
5/5
love
amy
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Very depressing

WOW! i really liked this!!! i love the way you experiment with different styles its awesome! ive never heard of this, but its really cool, i like it and your vocab is ace as usual =]