I like it. your poem is very good for you only being 13 i think. the only poem i could stand at 13 was The Raven. very nice work

This was sad. I'm sorry if you're going through all that. Keep writing though, it'll help so much! Trust me...take care.

God Bless

[[ Poetess ]]

That was really good =]
you've def. got talent.sry that you go through that w/your mom.
it was beautiful work tho.
--lexie

Nice one...5-5...but u shud put it under 'sad' i like the flow

Well my poem wasnt really for any one but lets go with that..;=]

Goood oneee!

This is really good for a 13 year old. It was very touching and sad. I think sometimes mothers are over protective without realising how it's affecting the kid. Thanks for sharing.

I love love this poem. I can relate a lot to it. i was in deep deep depression. but im making my way out of it now. but i know the feelings of how your mother treats you like your nothing and how you just want to die. but i'm not going to tell you it will get better i hate when ppl tell me that. but just keep your head up. don't give up. one day you will see it's worth it. this piece was beautiful. very emotional great job!

Good poem, Well written.. I know how you feel, Been a long time, but I do know. Once you get old enough to get up and out on your own things get better, Although worse in other ways. Gave you a 5, Keep up the good work.

Very nice poem, keep it up

Great job keep up the great work. im glad your not going through this its sad to see kids go through things like this keep up the good work

Very interesting i really liked it. I realized in your other poem && on here. i'm not sure with the next but i will that you used God for the first line which is very creative because most people don't even use it or if they do they don't use the first sentence for asking help or not. Very good. && creative && i love your work, very talented.

keep it up. keep on writing. Love always && forever.

Oh wow, this was so sad, it really got to me.
I found this really creative and touching, emotionally moving and I loved everything about it.

Help me God
it gives me SO much fear

its a good poem!

GOOD JOB.....very very believable

I'm glad you don't go through this with your mom. This is sad, but real great.
5/5

Definitely one of your better poems, nice job.

For a 13 year old, this was good, i mean, i liked it, but it wasnt the best because of your age, you need some more experience in life, but keep writing cos you do have talent
xxxxxx

Love this poem !

* $heila *

If you liked my poem then why did you give it a low rating?!