Okey ito ah,
Tungkol ba ito sa isang kaibigan mo na nwala at minahal mo ngunit di niya alam?...
I give it an honest 4.(point something)..
:-)
God bless!

Wow, that was amazing! Lol, yesh.. Sorry, I don't really understand.. But it seems cool.. =P Anywayyss, can you write your poems in english next time? Tehee.. Nice job

Ok hope you can handle some little critism.. just wanted to be honest and wanted to help you.. una, ndi ko maintindihan kung may rhyming ba tlga ung poem mo o wla? coz as i try to check it out, there are some stanzas that rhymes and some doesn't rhyme. second, i love the message though it somehow confuses me.. sino ba tlga ang iyong main character (i mean to whom do you dedicate this poem)? isang kaibigan ba o isang mahal mo (as in your "ex")?..
on the other side, i can really feel the emotions in here, and that's what i really appreciate (the presence of a vivid emotion and it really touch my heart) ...so sad... good work and nice piece

Galing!..sweet torture ang dating?..galing mu talaga!...naka relate ako dun..sana magbati kau dalawa noh?.para masaya.=D..More power!.=)