Sunrise with You

**When midnight and morning collide
Knowing your with me at sunrise
and as dawn stains this new sky
your words become my lullaby**

very powerful line esp how his words becomes your lullaby.

melissa

Wow. I really loved this poem. It expresses how I feel much better than I can. Each line was so smooth and trasitioned so well with the other lines before and after. Great write.

Beautiful write my friend. I absolutely loved it!
Take care

Bravo!!!! This is an excellent write. I loved the whole concept of the poem and it's feeled with such wonderful deep emotion. I really loved the last two stanzas:

Let time around us just disappear
the hours that pass don't compare
to how many more i want to spend with you...

When midnight and morning collide
Knowing your with me at sunrise
and as dawn stains this new sky
your words become my lullaby.

Those are some of the sweetest words that I have ever seen put together on paper/screen. lol. Keep up the excellent work I'm looking forward to reading more of your work;

Letty

This is so beautiful. You have captured love in a picturesque way. Very well done. xx