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  • I liked it, good job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    Omg!! thats great and so cute in some way
    xoxroxyxox
    keep the great writing up xox

  • 17 years ago

    by Savanha

    Well done bella... there was an error tho. look it over.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nicole

    I love it. its beautiful. 5/5 keep it up. *hugs*

  • 17 years ago

    by Sondos

    This is a beautiful short and sweet poem. Polished and lovely, it delivers a very well spelled out message, the only critiscim i have is that some of the lines are a little cliched but im sure thats nothing to worry about it. Very good 4.5/5

    Sondos

  • 17 years ago

    by becca mccracken

    That was a fabulous poem it really touched my heart.keep writing u are doing a great job.
    fantastic keep up good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by jordynn

    Awe i really love this.

  • 17 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    Great job i gives u 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea Sprite

    Muy bien. Very good. I liked it a lot. :) You are a good writer. Keep up the good work! :)

    ~~Spanish367

  • 17 years ago

    by x factor

    Short but good, meaningful

  • 17 years ago

    by charmed_one

    Very nice i like it well dun xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    I love ur poem. very very nice wrk

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Its very nice poem.... take care

  • 15 years ago

    by BrOkeN HeArt Can kill

    Awwwwwwwwwwww so sweet =)