Out of reach

by mikado   Sep 3, 2006


Although the million miles,
i feel u by my side,
every beat of my heart,
is a step to my pride.
i wanna see u every morning,
like i see the sun,
it surrounds me,warms me ,
takes me from every one.
i wanna feel u tender,
like a tear passing a cheek,
born in my eye ,
dies when decreed.
i wanna feel u shy,
like the red rose,
beautiful as,
when dew froze.
real love,
requires no tongue to speak of.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I loved the whole poem, especially the message, it's so sweet and sincere. I think you could improve it by changing your i's to I's and your u's to you's. It might give the wrong impression to your readers, and it would be a shame because this is a great poem.

    The word choice was excellent, I'm not sure about the last line though.

    Good job! 5/5

    Keep writing.

    XoXo
    Gaby

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