This is actuallii really sad good job

So so so sad...

Such a great write. I really liked the image you put inside my head. Very well done!!

5/5

Oh my god, that poems amazing. I love it, i think we can all relate lol. Keep up the good work.

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Hey.
i like this poem very much. i can relate to it. i can sencethe pain in ur words. i rated this a 5

I like this poem a lot... very sad... and creats a good picture in my head...

That was nice sad poem, i hope that image will fade away and u find the image of happiness.

That was nice sad poem, i hope that image will fade away and u find the image of happiness.

That was nice sad poem, i hope that image will fade away and u find the image of happiness.

It was like a movie, like gothika or sumat. 5/5 easy!!! well done!!

You've expressed this pain, this person who is you and not you very well.

This portrayed very good imagery, and i liked it. You did this very well. 5/5

I never expected to get as many comments on this poem. but thank you all

Even the ones that were quite hard. and critical. but the more the merrier

Great poem! i love the way u wrote it, great work hun..keep up the great work! n thnx 4 commentin on mine.
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Amazing. I can totally relate. Not necessarily about the part from under the bed. But I get the idea. Thanks for the comment, and this is an amazing poem. Keep it up. 5/5.

<3 bella

This is good

Wow this is so powerful! 5/5

Thanks guys x

This is a great poem - sad but good!
It was a gd idea to write about. Great imagery aswell!