Counting the Seconds

by Evil love   Sep 3, 2006


Come back to me
I'm waiting for you
Counting the seconds
Pacing around my room

It's been to long since you left me
But I know you will come back
If you, my love, don't return to me
My light world will go black

I want you back with me
To be back inside your arms
When you hold me close
I know I won't come to any harm

Looking deep into your eyes
I'm lost in a sea of blue
But i haven't seen you in so long
Oh, how I miss you

pacing by my window
I hear a noise outside my door
This has happened before, it was never you
But still. I'll look once more

I open up my door
And see you standing there
Your flowing robe, your icy blue eyes
Your long, pale blonde hair

You gather me in your arms
Promising you'll never leave
You've said this before, you always lie
I don't know what to believe

But you hold me against your chest
And tell me that you love me
I'll still be counting the seconds
Hoping that you never leave

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  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww. It's so cute! I feel like this in my crush's arms! (Yes, 'tis only a crush, but we act like we're dating lol) I just wish that I could never leave his arms, and be with him forever. I never knew exactly how to put my feelings like that into a poem. You kind of expressed my feelings, as well as your own lol. That talent is rare and excellent to posess.

    There was good flow throughout most of it, although it could be improved upon. But the emotion was absolutely perfect. It let me know exactly how you felt.

    Sorry it took so long to r/r/c. >.< I've been busy lol. 5/5 xoxo =)

    Samantha

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