I'm on my psp right now, so i'll come bak later and write a good comment.

Not as good as your previous work to be honest.
It's a different style, I liek it.
But I love ur other pieces.
~Emma
xxoo

Oh this is a wonderful write! It is different, and a simple but powerful write. These are the types of poems I love, that could make the reader so lured into such a small masterpiece!

I really like this poem,
It flows really well,
And has a simple, yet great rhythm.
The imagery created when i read this is incredible,
No matter what anyone says this is a very good poem, up there with your best, and i like it cos it's different.
You've expressed yourself, that's all that matters.
love ya

Good choice of words
Though I would not agree on some line,that makes confusion.
5/5

God Bless!

Very good poem 5/5

This is a great poem. Though some
of the lines are confussing. But I like
the style of it. It's different and I
believe with just a bit of editing it can
be perfect. 5/5

Great Job
Letty

WOW, really deep. i like ur taste:)