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  • 17 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    Thank you for the comment. This is a good poem, the adjectives are okay, and the flow is good throughout the poem.
    But I was questioning the quality of the rhyme scheme.
    Is it
    A
    B
    C
    A
    ?
    I couldn't exactly tell. Anyways keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by MiaFairy

    Very good!!!!!!!! i really like this one!