Yes this one was long but then very interesting too.....so length just doesnt matter....its so ironical that love and revenge goes together in real life....really like dthe wya u wrote the whole incident

great write

all the best and take care

I know what your talking bout, exellent poem, keep it up

Nice poem thanks for commenting my poem i am adding you to my favorites now and i hope you add me if you like any of my poems like that alright keep up the good work!

I liked it...thanks for the comment keep your head up...hit me back...peace

I loved this! I can somewhat relate to this. Don't have much to say...but yeah, I liked it a lot! Keep it up!!!

Much love,

[[ Liz ]]

-P.S. I'm half Puerto Rican aaannd...my gramma's from Spain. =) -

Fantastic ...................u create magic with ur words.keep it up.

Yesterday you broke the walls
It had been so hard to build them up.
But my game was spoiled, again in love I was
All because of you, you kept playing with my heart…
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^^ I can relate to that so much right now. It was kinda long but it was worth the read. This was a good poem. never stop writing!

-` Liz

I really love this part:

"Yesterday you broke the walls
It had been so hard to build them up.
But my game was spoiled, again in love I was
All because of you, you kept playing with my heart"

I love the whole poem actually :)
really good job
Sarah x x Hope you'll make a new poem soon