Oh god, this is truly great, Honestly I rate this poem as the top one poem in the site,
It is so deep and full of great meaning.it is so touchy

Wow this poem was great i loved your wording and your rhyming 5/5

That was amamzing your an an awsoe writter keep up the good work.. if you could comment mine id be very gratful.. ty . 5/5

Absolutely deep... i cannot find the words to describe... maybe i can find the numbers... 5/5

~angel~

Ah a refreshing read..
You have that nice touch that adds life to poem.
Good work!

Wowee-- Noni! This was great. I'm starting to understand what you mean about using too many big words, they can take the emotions and everything away from the poem. In this one though, you used some good vocab but you didn't overdo it like I do, tehe. It was wonderful. Your flow was great, and I loved the rhyming! Great job! 5/5

Natalie``

Thank goodness the door caged in all sound
Or screams and cries would erupt all around
((I LOVED, absolutely adore, these lines..))

Oh. My. God. This is...just wow. For some odd reason, it almost made me cry.. But god this was so beautifully written! I really didn't think that was what the poem would be about, but good god...It is simply amazing. God do I wish I could express my feelings for this poem... I adore it! Wonderful job!

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Ooo. Very good dark poem. I liked the vocab loads. The flow was excellent. No changes needed here. =) xoxo 5/5

Samantha

Oh my goodness! That was so amazing. At first I just thought it was going to be a typical long boring poem. But with you, I don't think any of your poems would be described as that. And you're only 15?! You are amazing, truly. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.

Basically everything I could say was already mentioned before...good job!

You are an amazing writer...I can't believe you are only 15. You have talent girl, keep up the fantastic work.

Ooo i love this. it makes my toes curl. ist the sort of poems people always struggle writing but yours is written well. my only thing is the lack of punctuation. The rest of it is love at first read.

WOW, this is one of my favourites on the entire site. It deserves more than a 5/5

OOO this is truly one of the best poems i've read keep up the great work