You are a really good writer. I was just reading your profile and I agree that young people have the same right and ability to express their emotion as adults. I started writing when I was in third grade actually, and now looking back I reallized that I had a lot to say back then too.
I think that people have their opinions about young people's writing because they think your skills probably are not developed but that is certainly not the case with you. You are a very VERY talented writer. KEEP WRITING! Imean that. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Yeah... this is definitely my favorite poem of yours of all time.. especially this part:

A boy with a plan, right from the start,
first sets you up, then breaks your heart.

BUT.. you spelled Liar wrong. ^_^

Great use of words and loved the rhythm and flow... verry good

Sad.
As a reader, I can tell that you put some very strong emotions into this one. It was a very sad love poem to read.

A boy with a plan, right from the start,
first sets you up, then breaks your heart.
You simply can't believe it, you have to cry,
The one you love is someone else's guy.

^ My favorite stanza. You chose a great way to end this poem at whole. I always say that a great ending is one of the key things in making a poem perfect.

You had a great flow, imagery, and vocabulary too!
Great job, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Good poem, you really do have talent, 5/5!!!

I loved this as well.
My favourite part was the last stanza, this really hit hard.
You are a wonderful writer, I'm going to add you to my favourites.