Dous any one like this

I like it a lot. I know I relate to it...it was very powerful and I loved the way you ended it. A few conflicts with the stanzas, but hey, it happens when you really just get into the poem. Its still really great! I hope you feel better, I'll keep you in my prayers.

Wow i love this poem... so touching...

I loved the message behind this poem. i fell i can relate to it. a good piece of writing

Greatly expressed, awesome poem.

I love it and thanks for commenting mine