This is so sad. just hang in there *hugs*. as a poem i thought the end bit was a bit better.. poetically.. lol

*hugs* again.. xoxo

I cried!!!!!! lol this happens to me alot too. email me we hav lots in common and please check out my poems xoxo

Whoa! amazing talent in your writting!!

ps
i got ur comment(cut up boy)
i am SO sorry about your frineds death.
i cant even imagine my life without this man in it.
i dont no how to stop him!
he lives 7 hours away. im here. hes there.
i dont no how to stop him!
please...if u have ANY advice..help me!!
i need to help him!

Wow, i love that writing style, but its painful to read knowing its true...
keep writing and i'll keep reading,
goodluck,
-Bert

Wow...i have a friend who was in a similar problem she moved out and stayed with a friend...if its a friend that u need... iwill be here for u if u wanna talk...i am a good listener and would try to help in any way possible. i really like ur poems as sad as they are. no body deserves to be put through what ur going through 5/5

Honey, you do not have to be treated that way, You are being abused! Listen to me closely, you can call someone for help, call the police station and ask for an organization near you that deals with child abuse or they can help you. Don`t listen to your friends this time , no one deserves this ,don`t let your dad or anyone else make you think you do.I will stay with you on this.

Ohhh my godd im so sorry!! i wish i could help, no one should have to go throught that.

THE ONLY HELP I CAN GIVE YOU IS
TO TELL YOU to keep writting, don't
stop . i'll get reading and keep sharing your pain. i been through
the same shit hang in there and
when you get out and run and
never look back. just remenber
and break the cycle.don't do the same shitto your kids. remember.