Very peaceful, delicate poem. Great job...keep it up

Simple but so great. i can picture the view.another 5/5 fro me.

Very nice piece.
You have done a great job in describing a scenery.

Good job.

Thats cool!

short nice! simple,
and fun to read

nice writting!

Another amazing poemm! They all flow so brilliantly and the words used are so beautiful and full of imagery.. I loved this one, nicely done! 5/5

Beautiful, though I really tend to be afraid of the ocean, I feel calm by your poem. The soft waves crashing on the rocks: So soothing.

Wow! This was such a short poem, but it held so much emotion in it! And it really did put the picture of waves crashing amongst a shore and then slowly working their way back into the water! Kind of made me want to go to the beach as well lol. Keep up the good work Darling. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.

Nat, there was only one thing I didn't like in this poem, and that was the word 'upon'. It didn't really fit for me. But it was still a good poem.

There's a good picture in this poem, made me think of the seagulls and everything even though you didn't talk about them. Great job

Wow..it makes me wnt to go there....ur really good!!