OMGOSH this is really good.. i love the last lil half paragraph thingy lol.. its like.. omgosh just the best.. i love love love it.. and the rest of the poem is good too! hehe =]P lov yaH!

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Wow! This was so powerful and had a lot of emotion. And the ending finished it off well, while still leaving you to think of what happened later. Great job! :) And congrats again!
~Midnight Sun

This poem was wonderfully written. the only thing that i felt was out of place was this line,

"and that there was no reason to mope. "

i know there aren't many things that rhyme with hope, but that line just stuck out of place. other than that the poem was wonderful. 5/5

Beautiful poem, i loved it alot, it realls speaks to you. 5/5

GREAT POEM!
I still loved it after another read. Keep up the great work, 5/5q