by LadyPearl
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Beautiful poem. Loved it |
by Goran Rahim
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This is so great natalie, you wrote is so greatly, you are so talanted, keep up the great work like always.5/5 |
by Misstress
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Interesting, |
by Robie Lincer
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This is awsome! i love reading poems like these! but i cant write them lol |
by Tormented
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Hey! |
by Esther
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Wow it was very good! n like my other poem it was not what i exoected! but i liked it loads!!! 5/5 |
by Jessica
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Wow, hunny! This was amazing.. It sounded so perfect.. It was as if it had no form at all because of how well it flowed.. The words you chose were so well fitted and the poem was just all over perfection! Loved it sweetie, Ily! 5/5 |
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While I think this poem was beaufitul in a sad way, I know that while tears reveal our confessions and secrets, sometimes people never read them and they fall as tears. Lovely but sad all the same. |
by dora
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Hey darl good jb on this one too. good job xx |
by Lithium
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Wow u know alot about poetry, there short and meaningful good work |
by Tammie
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You have wonderful talent. You have the gift of being able to use the perfect words in such a short poem and make it sound amazing. Keep up the great work. Look forward to reading more! =] |
by Zach Buenger
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Makes my imagination run wild! |
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I liked this one a lot as well. And oh my, It was submitted on September 7, and there are already 2267 visits! I think that really goes to show how talented you really are! I really liked the ending line in this one, made me think. Nice job! 5/5 =] |
by Darien
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Great descriptive word. Cascading, wow! that one blew me away. |
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Short but good |
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Another great Cinquain by you! I love all of them... |