It flows very nicely i like it!

This bit is my fave

You were my present but now my past
We have no future we just couldnt last
So tonight I'll drink the memory of you away
Praying this feeling of heartbreak wont always stay

Really good rhyme there!

Good poem um i dont think i know her why.
great poem 5/5.

Aww wow this is a great poem....keep writing and thank u so much 4 the comment it means a lot!!!

I know exactly how you feel

Im sorry. If this is true.
Just keep going
youll find someone better.
Promise.