I am speechless facing this wonderful poem, you have done a wonderful job and i am 100 % sure this will win any contest you enter.
very nicely done.

I like this poem it has got rythm and although (sorry) it has got rythm it makes it sound less deep, but i liked it still it was great! 5/5

Wow! This is a great, well-written poem. Well done! The rhyme scheme isn't perfect, but the briliant standered of writing more than makes up for it 5/5

Imi
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Wow... I think i like your other new one better, but once again this is phenomenal. Excellent job!

Wow, that was great Noni! The flow was effortless and flowed really well with all the rhymes you used.. The descriptions were amazing and it was all really dark. Wonderful work! 5/5

Reaching relms where death is life
Where fallen angels work and thrive
((This doesn't really rhyme, in my opinion...That is, if it was supposed to..))

I liked this. It told such a beautiful story in such a few amount of lines.. You have a beautiful way of writing, Noni. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Wow, you better have won that contest! This poem was truly amazing, and I really loved you never used the common words such as I, he or she or whatever. That was a great element to this poem. The ending for this poem, fit perfectly. It was very well done. Deserves nothing less than a five. =]

-Jenna.

I really like this Noni, I like that I can connect with it in some ways and in others it is truely your own. It was a pleasure to read.

This is one of the best poems i've read.xox leah.

I know for a fact the contest you entered in has no competition! This poem is flawless, the flow is incredible and I felt as if I wanted it to go on forever. It was so beautiful, one of the best I've read in a very long time. Keep up your great work!

Wow that was deep like BAM WOW DUDE..
lol..
that was really really good..
can you plz read and rate mine as ive just done for you..
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That was nice....excellence...I love the way it ended

Wow, I really enjoyed reading this poem. The flow of your words really brought me into it. Great Work =)

x.xBrokenx.x