I need you

by David   Sep 9, 2006


I want you
You taunt me
I ask you
You haunt me

I beg you
You play me
I pray you
You slay me

I plead you
You shun me
I love you
You ignore me
I need you
You leave me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This poem has a very nice flow and it's leaves me feeling very happy!

    Very good poem by you!

    I am giving you 5/5,

    Best wishes, Ingrid

  • 17 years ago

    by KIM

    I love that

  • 17 years ago

    by GraCiE

    I liked it it was very quirky! but i reckon it would be even better if you added more to it! keep it up!! x x

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