Kool, very well written, kind of like a toungue twister..

october xx

It seems to be a light hearted contemplation poem maybe deeper than most will understand, or over some heads
I love it.

Well it's not really well written but it made me laugh in a way. The message was a mixture of clear and unclear but I don't know if you wanted it to be taken seriously. I laughed though lol hard to do with poems.

I feel like i could die
(('I'))

Lol.. this poem made me laugh and I don't know why. It was uplifting and very...Happy? Lol I don't know, but I liked it. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Haha this poem is soo pathetic im laughin, im sorry but...yea lol