Hmmm, interesting....i think theres more to this poem than is actually read..

great words though

october xx

I like how you ended that..
Good work!

Keep on writing on what you feel and like..

This is a very thought provoking weell written dark poem.

What you say,
What you do,
Everything you touch,
You nearly got me too,
((I really liked this.. It's so simple...It's really good.))
Your whole body soaked in this,
((May I use this line? If not, I understand))

I really liked this. You're very good at writing your feelings and that is what a poet should do. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Ahhhhh.
Very creative.
I like how you wrote it.
Good Job.

Well hello hello hatred! Jeez this poem was just so intense with raw emotion...wow. Great work. I liked the whole short sentancing...it makes it come off more angry, which of course is a good thing. Great work m'dear!
~Dana

I liked It but dont know why lol

I like this poem because its truly unique. :D xoxo leah

Another great one, once again 5/5 as u really deserve it